John K Adams
1 min readMar 4, 2020

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Aamir,

I’m sure your articles contain valuable information but your unconventional syntax makes me question if I am understanding what you are trying to say.

One more edit or using the Hemingway editor or Grammarly might help in clearing up some easily avoidable confusion.

Thanks!

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John K Adams

I write to see memory and language wrestle with reality. Please comment.